Hymn the Girl

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mistertambourineman
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Hymn the Girl

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Hey guys,

Check out my Byrds influenced song - hope you like!

http://www.myspace.com/wearetambourine

Paul.
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That is really charming. I especially like the incision/decision rhyme. I have but one suggestion: the Rick needs to come up a bit during the solo. Either that, or record a solo over top of that bit. All in all, great writing, good solid melody. Congrats.
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I can dig it. :D
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Paul, I really liked it. Very nice. Good chord changes and nice vocals. Congrats!

Pat
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