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Hymn the Girl
Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 2:44 pm
by mistertambourineman
Hey guys,
Check out my Byrds influenced song - hope you like!
http://www.myspace.com/wearetambourine
Paul.
Re: Hymn the Girl
Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 4:23 pm
by jimk
That is really charming. I especially like the incision/decision rhyme. I have but one suggestion: the Rick needs to come up a bit during the solo. Either that, or record a solo over top of that bit. All in all, great writing, good solid melody. Congrats.
JimK
Re: Hymn the Girl
Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 4:43 pm
by paologregorio
I can dig it.
Re: Hymn the Girl
Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 10:58 am
by pehayes2
Paul, I really liked it. Very nice. Good chord changes and nice vocals. Congrats!
Pat