On Indian River (11 of 14)

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lyle_from_minneapolis
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On Indian River (11 of 14)

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Here's #11 of 14 for FAWM. Sorry to clog the forum! Almost done.. :roll:

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7374120

On Indian River

On Indian River
I saw a man
Fall from the sky

He fell to the river
Surfaced and laughed
Gave a great cry

I watched him in wonder
Eyes like the sun
Naked and strong

As I floated toward him
He disappeared
Into his song

He sang a song so deep and wide
Falcons would fly, mountains would hide
Until the rivers of change could take him somplace
He's never been

His song made me tremble
Shook my canoe
Brought me to tears

But when he stopped singing
I was alive
Shriven of fear

He came to me softly
He touched my arm
Opened my eyes

I must have been dreaming
Only a crow
High in the sky

And I have a song so deep and wide
Falcons will fly, mountains will hide
Until the rivers of change can take me someplace
I've never been
I've never been

(Copyright 2009 by Mark Kaufman)
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I'm not ignoring you, Mark. I'd just like to hear them all together before I comment. Great work in progress, though. :D
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Hee hee...if this were really an album, it would be more like The Basement Tapes. Kinda bizarre.
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Hey, if it looks like an album, and walks like an album ...
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Post by walker »

Hey Mark -

I just got caught up on the FAWM project tonight while working on some photo projects. Great tunes to keep me company! So much great stuff here - I like how you stepped out of the country realm for a few songs. 'Change' has a very Beatlesque quality with a contemporary feel in the production. 'Raymond' is an awfully bitter-sweet tune. Well executed. Writing about a buddy since passed isn't an easy thing to do without totally sounding cheesy or over-the-top. Your sense of humor is in top form on 'Jesus Mobile.' Rather got a kick out of that one. 'Alice...' is among my faves out of the series. Great sneering rocker!

OK, sir! Back to work! You've got 2 days to crank out the last three tunes!

Seriously, you're my new hero for having taken on such an undertaking and produced such great tunes in the batch!

God speed, Mr. Kaufman.
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