Shine On, My Love (12 of 14)

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lyle_from_minneapolis
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Shine On, My Love (12 of 14)

Post by lyle_from_minneapolis »

Chalking this one up to thin air and no sleep...thought I was done.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7377177


Shine On, My Love


Fly, my love
Shine on, my love
I shan't ask why
Did you cry
So shine on, my love
Seems we've been waiting here
For many a year
So I fear
Best not ask why
Did you cry
So shine on, my love
Live in the time of your life

Fly, my love
Shine on above
I shan't ask why
Did you die
So shine on, my love
I will be waiting for you
I will be true
I'm with you
I shan't ask why
Did you die
So shine on, my love
Live in the time of your life

(Copyright 2009 by Mark Kaufman)
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Re: Shine On, My Love (12 of 14)

Post by walker »

Wow! Gorgeous harmonies. I know I say that a lot in response to your tunes, Mark, but this is really top notch even by your standards. This song has a bitter-sweet element that I really dig. The brevity is nice, too. Leave 'em wanting more!
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