The Curse of Carrie

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lyle_from_minneapolis
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The Curse of Carrie

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Here's a collaboration with Noel Downs. We first did this a couple years ago, back when I was still recording on cassette tapes, so I really wanted to do a new version without lots of hiss. It's a longer storytelling song with sailors, lovers and magic. Any comments or suggestions are most welcome!

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The Curse of Carrie

She sat near the hearth staring into the flames
She then cast her wish and whispered his name
I've asked all gods of love and they've finally heard
It's with this hope I speak these ancient words

Though I know you not I heard your name in a dream
In this very glade by this very stream
I pray you keep safe and find joy in your life
I pray you come find me and make me your wife

Across the far miles way out at sea
Standing on watch he shook violently
Her vision appeared and he heard his name called
When his soul returned it was lonely and cold

He soon left his ship and his love of the sea
To wander the lands his mind no longer free
His one purpose in life to search the earth
To hunt down the woman who gave him this curse

Neath a hill on a road where it crossed a stream
Collecting water the girl who haunted his dreams
I have not slept a night for these three years past
Since the night that you cursed me I've found you at last

He approached her with menace, her life he did demand
At the tears on her cheek the knife slipped from his hand
He embraced her lithe form as she fell into his arms
The turbulent seas of his mind were finally calmed

As I wandered these lands I could not take time to rest
I feared my dreams, I believed you'd called me in jest
But your soft spoken words ease all pains of the past
My prayers are answered you've found me at last

But your soft spoken words ease all pains of the past
My prayers are answered you've found me at last

Copyright 2007 by Noel Downs & Mark Kaufman
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A lyrical painting of words.Great song and recording Mark thanks.Your one of my favourites that post on this section Im a fan.Nice one
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Thank you so much, sir! Gotta go blush now... :oops:
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Compelling composition, Mark. One of your best collabs. Great lyrics & melodies. Were the word & music duties split between you, or did you both contribute equally to both? (How's that for redundant sentence structure?)
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Not merely redundant, but repetitive. :lol: I was asked to put music to his finished lyric. I really liked it as it had such a timeless sensibility to it. It put me in mind of The Byrds' version of "John Riley", and I guess there's a good deal of resemblance in the harmonies. Thanks Mark!
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