Post you enlightening Haiku here!

[jps]

Love small pleasure thing
A little Rickenbacker
On wings of light Yeah

[melibreits]

Sing to me Ric song
Luminous twelve-string chiming,
Shimmers like dawn's light.

[eatswodo]

Knocking at the door
Hear it speeding up and down
Must be the drummer

[rictified]

Knocking at the door
Hear it speeding up and down
Must be the drummer

hahahahaha!!

[rictified]

My eardrums are burning
From that extremely loud volume that emits forth
Must be the guitarist.

[jps]

Haiku is made up of seventeen syllables, five in the first line, seven in the second, and five in the third. There was another thread where I made up my first Haiku, then I looked up Haiku and found out what it's construction was; I found out my first attempt was incorrect. that is part of the challenge, to do the 5-7-5 construction of these!

[wj350]

Music calls out to me
Follows me into my dreams
and colors my life

[rictified]

My eardrums are burning
From that extremely loud volume that emits forth
Must be the guitarist.

My eardrums they burn
From that volume that comes forth
Must be the guitar.

[melibreits]

Music calls out to me
Follows me into my dreams
and colors my life

That's terrific, Bill!

Brings to mind the song I just wrote a couple of weeks ago about "The Song of My Dreams..." I'm in the process of tweaking my demo recording of it, and hopefully will have a "postable" rendition of it soon!

[jps]

My eardrums are burning
From that extremely loud volume that emits forth
Must be the guitarist.

My eardrums they burn
From that volume that comes forth
Must be the guitar.

[shinynewtoy]

The bass is too loud?
What are you talking about?
Damn selfish six string.

[lyle_from_minneapolis]

Paul's bass, monster tone
on Helter Skelter, the best!
Huh? That was John? ...oh.

[charlyg]

Does it count extra if they rhyme?

I woke up today (or, in keeping with the theme but not the rhyme,"Woke up this mornin")
Got the blues so I will play
They will go away.

[sir_andrew_of_left_coast]

Gleaned from Cool Hand Luke:
I can eat fifty eggs... Burp!
A night in the box.

[sowhat]

I was so hungry.
Somebody ate all my food.
Must be a punker.

Woke up in the night.
Someone was howling in dark.
Must be a bluesman.

My head was throbbing.
Someone could not hit a note.
Must be a pop-star.