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Post you enlightening Haiku here!
Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 1:51 pm
by jps
Love small pleasure thing
A little Rickenbacker
On wings of light Yeah
Re: Post you enlightening Haiku here!
Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 12:07 pm
by melibreits
Sing to me Ric song
Luminous twelve-string chiming,
Shimmers like dawn's light.
Re: Post you enlightening Haiku here!
Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 5:10 pm
by eatswodo
Knocking at the door
Hear it speeding up and down
Must be the drummer
Re: Post you enlightening Haiku here!
Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 1:42 am
by rictified
eatswodo wrote:Knocking at the door
Hear it speeding up and down
Must be the drummer
hahahahaha!!
Re: Post you enlightening Haiku here!
Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 1:44 am
by rictified
My eardrums are burning
From that extremely loud volume that emits forth
Must be the guitarist.
Re: Post you enlightening Haiku here!
Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 10:26 am
by jps
Haiku is made up of seventeen syllables, five in the first line, seven in the second, and five in the third. There was another thread where I made up my first Haiku, then I looked up Haiku and found out what it's construction was; I found out my first attempt was incorrect. that is part of the challenge, to do the 5-7-5 construction of these!
Re: Post you enlightening Haiku here!
Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 1:49 pm
by wj350
Music calls out to me
Follows me into my dreams
and colors my life
Re: Post you enlightening Haiku here!
Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 2:34 pm
by rictified
rictified wrote:My eardrums are burning
From that extremely loud volume that emits forth
Must be the guitarist.
My eardrums they burn
From that volume that comes forth
Must be the guitar.
Re: Post you enlightening Haiku here!
Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 4:51 pm
by melibreits
wj350 wrote:Music calls out to me
Follows me into my dreams
and colors my life
That's terrific, Bill!
Brings to mind the song I just wrote a couple of weeks ago about "The Song of My Dreams..." I'm in the process of tweaking my demo recording of it, and hopefully will have a "postable" rendition of it soon!
Re: Post you enlightening Haiku here!
Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 7:37 pm
by jps
rictified wrote:rictified wrote:My eardrums are burning
From that extremely loud volume that emits forth
Must be the guitarist.
My eardrums they burn
From that volume that comes forth
Must be the guitar.
Re: Post you enlightening Haiku here!
Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 9:42 pm
by shinynewtoy
The bass is too loud?
What are you talking about?
Damn selfish six string.
Re: Post you enlightening Haiku here!
Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 10:49 pm
by lyle_from_minneapolis
Paul's bass, monster tone
on Helter Skelter, the best!
Huh? That was John? ...oh.
Re: Post you enlightening Haiku here!
Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 10:56 pm
by charlyg
Does it count extra if they rhyme?
I woke up today (or, in keeping with the theme but not the rhyme,"Woke up this mornin")
Got the blues so I will play
They will go away.
Re: Post you enlightening Haiku here!
Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 3:09 am
by sir_andrew_of_left_coast
Gleaned from Cool Hand Luke:
I can eat fifty eggs... Burp!
A night in the box.
Re: Post you enlightening Haiku here!
Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 3:51 am
by sowhat
I was so hungry.
Somebody ate all my food.
Must be a punker.
Woke up in the night.
Someone was howling in dark.
Must be a bluesman.
My head was throbbing.
Someone could not hit a note.
Must be a pop-star.