Lemonade
- lyle_from_minneapolis
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Lemonade
Trying something a little different here...still a work in progress.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... ID=6680723
Lemonade
I'm on the run
In the summer sun
She likes to take it easy
I feel my thirst
But she comes first
And then it's cool and breezy
I used to drink to feel all right
But since she taught me day from night
It's out of sight
My Lemonade
She's so sweet
She takes the heat
And makes it into shady shade
Won't even think
About a drink
Just want my Lemonade
When I'm in pain
She brings me rain
Washes all the blues away
When I’m withdrawn
She pours it on
Splashing colors on the gray
I used to drink to feel all right
But when she switches on the light
It's out of sight
My Lemonade...
I'm a roman candle
Great balls of fire
When I'm afraid
She knows why
I get hard to handle
When all I desire
Is Lemonade
My Lemonade...
So when I burn
She takes her turn
Says she's my biggest fan
When I'm hot
She hits the spot
She knows I'm just a thirsty man
I used to drink to feel all right
Now I can tell the fight from flight
It's out of sight
My Lemonade
She's so sweet
She takes the heat
And makes it into shady shade
Don't even think
About a drink
Just want my Lemonade
And if I blow
She slows the flow
And when I see her fade
I hold her near
Beside the mirror
And kiss my Lemonade
Copyright 2008 by Mark Kaufman
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... ID=6680723
Lemonade
I'm on the run
In the summer sun
She likes to take it easy
I feel my thirst
But she comes first
And then it's cool and breezy
I used to drink to feel all right
But since she taught me day from night
It's out of sight
My Lemonade
She's so sweet
She takes the heat
And makes it into shady shade
Won't even think
About a drink
Just want my Lemonade
When I'm in pain
She brings me rain
Washes all the blues away
When I’m withdrawn
She pours it on
Splashing colors on the gray
I used to drink to feel all right
But when she switches on the light
It's out of sight
My Lemonade...
I'm a roman candle
Great balls of fire
When I'm afraid
She knows why
I get hard to handle
When all I desire
Is Lemonade
My Lemonade...
So when I burn
She takes her turn
Says she's my biggest fan
When I'm hot
She hits the spot
She knows I'm just a thirsty man
I used to drink to feel all right
Now I can tell the fight from flight
It's out of sight
My Lemonade
She's so sweet
She takes the heat
And makes it into shady shade
Don't even think
About a drink
Just want my Lemonade
And if I blow
She slows the flow
And when I see her fade
I hold her near
Beside the mirror
And kiss my Lemonade
Copyright 2008 by Mark Kaufman
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fireglo67
Re: Lemonade
Another top quality song and performance. A great 'summer feel good' song,
You've definitely got 'the tone' with your vocals, and the harmonies are sweet. The arrangement is spot on and the production sound on all the instruments is pure and unfussy. Superb!
Probably my fave track so far.
Great work.
You've definitely got 'the tone' with your vocals, and the harmonies are sweet. The arrangement is spot on and the production sound on all the instruments is pure and unfussy. Superb!
Probably my fave track so far.
Great work.
- lyle_from_minneapolis
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Re: Lemonade
Thanks Rob! Sort of a tip of the hat to the Beatles. 
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fireglo67
Re: Lemonade
Yeah, the influences are pretty obvious, but there's nothing wrong with that as your influences are solid gold!lyle_from_minneapolis wrote:Thanks Rob! Sort of a tip of the hat to the Beatles.
Anyway, besides all that, you always put your own stamp on things too.
Sounds cool to me.
Looking forward to your album.......
Re: Lemonade
Very nice!!!!!!
- lyle_from_minneapolis
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Re: Lemonade
Thanks John! Much appreciated. -mk
Re: Lemonade
Mark,
That is your best of the best. I like your stuff............you know that, but this has gone so far over the top of everything else that you now have a new gold standard. What's cool about it, is that you've established the highbar yourself. First class my friend. First class all the way.
That is your best of the best. I like your stuff............you know that, but this has gone so far over the top of everything else that you now have a new gold standard. What's cool about it, is that you've established the highbar yourself. First class my friend. First class all the way.
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Re: Lemonade
Yikes!
Now what am I gonna do??
Thanks so much, Winston...coming from you that carries a lot of weight for me.
-mk
Now what am I gonna do??
Thanks so much, Winston...coming from you that carries a lot of weight for me.
-mk
Re: Lemonade
Mark: I cannot remember the last time I listened to a new song and felt the shivers up the nape of my neck as I did in listening to your composition.
This well-crafted song, refreshes like a soft summer rain, quenches the thirst following a long musical drought and comforts the soul after a long journey away.
Simply outstanding.
This well-crafted song, refreshes like a soft summer rain, quenches the thirst following a long musical drought and comforts the soul after a long journey away.
Simply outstanding.
Life, as with music, often requires one to let go of the melody and listen to the rhythm
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Re: Lemonade
Mark - no, not your best.... I feel that is yet to come! And I mean that in a most positive way. Keep churning them out - I'm liking this. Great feel to it!!
- lyle_from_minneapolis
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Re: Lemonade
Good lord, what's a guy supposed to say to that?admin wrote:Mark: I cannot remember the last time I listened to a new song and felt the shivers up the nape of my neck as I did in listening to your composition.
This well-crafted song, refreshes like a soft summer rain, quenches the thirst following a long musical drought and comforts the soul after a long journey away.
Simply outstanding.
How about THANK YOU. Man, that's humbling. thank you very much, Peter.
-Mark
- lyle_from_minneapolis
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Re: Lemonade
Hey, that's the spirit! I agree entirely...the best is always yet to come. To quote Mary, Queen of Scots: "I'm not dead yet!"ram wrote:Mark - no, not your best.... I feel that is yet to come! And I mean that in a most positive way. Keep churning them out - I'm liking this. Great feel to it!!
Thanks Tom!
-mk
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Re: Lemonade
New mix posted, with proper drums and bigger sound! 
